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暴雨致路段塌陷成"大坑"

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2019年12月02日 20:12

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【初】【四】【,】【真】【是】【个】【多】【事】【之】【秋】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【走】【进】【初】【四】【,】【体】【验】【初】【四】【进】【行】【曲】【,】【别】【有】【一】【番】【滋】【味】【在】【心】【头】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【紧】【张】【:】【生】【活】【的】【主】【旋】【律】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【紧】【张】【,】【不】【容】【置】【疑】【,】【每】【当】【想】【到】【六】【月】【已】【经】【离】【我】【们】【不】【远】【了】【,】【心】【里】【便】【会】【莫】【名】【地】【紧】【张】【,】【甚】【至】【焦】【虑】【,】【毕】【竟】【十】【年】【寒】【窗】【,】【在】【此】【一】【搏】【啊】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【进】【入】【初】【四】【,】【考】【试】【便】【与】【我】【们】【结】【下】【了】【不】【解】【之】【缘】【,】【真】【所】【谓】【“】【大】【考】【三】【六】【九】【,】【小】【考】【天】【天】【有】【”】【,】【各】【科】【试】【卷】【雪】【片】【似】【的】【向】【我】【们】【袭】【来】【,】【不】【到】【两】【个】【月】【,】【就】【填】【满】【了】【桌】【斗】【。】【同】【学】【们】【每】【天】【每】【时】【每】【刻】【笔】【耕】【不】【辍】【,】【忙】【着】【解】【未】【懂】【之】【题】【;】【忙】【着】【向】【老】【师】【求】【教】【;】【忙】【着】【订】【正】【错】【题】【。】【草】【草】【吃】【完】【饭】【,】【来】【不】【及】【刷】【洗】【碗】【筷】【,】【便】【都】【捧】【起】【书】【,】【摇】【头】【晃】【脑】【地】【读】【起】【来】【,】【稀】【里】【哗】【啦】【的】【声】【响】【不】【绝】【于】【耳】【,】【仿】【佛】【有】【千】【军】【万】【马】【一】【窝】【蜂】【地】【奔】【向】【敌】【阵】【。】【为】【了】【六】【月】【那】【个】【未】【知】【数】【,】【紧】【张】【是】【唯】【一】【不】【变】【的】【基】【调】【。】【学】【校】【里】【,】【教】【室】【、】【宿】【舍】【、】【食】【堂】【,】【三】【点】【一】【线】【是】【不】【变】【的】【航】【线】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【然】【而】【,】【紧】【张】【并】【没】【有】【完】【全】【吞】【噬】【我】【们】【,】【在】【繁】【重】【的】【学】【习】【中】【,】【我】【们】【也】【体】【验】【着】【充】【实】【而】【又】【满】【足】【的】【快】【乐】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【牢】【骚】【:】【生】【活】【的】【小】【夜】【曲】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【 】【“】【唉】【,】【中】【考】【题】【太】【难】【了】【,】【我】【指】【定】【考】【不】【上】【。】【”】【甲】【垂】【头】【丧】【气】【,】【一】【脸】【苦】【行】【僧】【的】【模】【样】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【本】【人】【已】【数】【月】【不】【知】【电】【视】【为】【何】【物】【,】【不】【知】【音】【乐】【为】【何】【味】【了】【。】【”】【乙】【苦】【苦】【哀】【叹】【着】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【啊】【呀】【,】【差】【点】【忘】【了】【大】【事】【,】【下】【午】【政】【治】【课】【上】【还】【提】【问】【呢】【,】【如】【果】【背】【不】【过】【…】【…】【”】【丙】【的】【一】【声】【提】【醒】【,】【惊】【醒】【了】【梦】【中】【人】【,】【于】【是】【大】【家】【各】【就】【各】【位】【,】【赶】【紧】【备】【战】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【牢】【骚】【,】【因】【中】【考】【而】【发】【,】【早】【已】【司】【空】【见】【惯】【,】【不】【足】【为】【奇】【,】【仿】【佛】【成】【了】【生】【活】【中】【不】【可】【或】【缺】【的】【一】【支】【小】【夜】【曲】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【希】【望】【:】【生】【命】【的】【狂】【想】【曲】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【好】【消】【息】【,】【老】【师】【说】【今】【年】【中】【考】【给】【我】【校】【3】【5】【0】【个】【名】【额】【,】【我】【们】【只】【要】【考】【班】【里】【前】【3】【5】【名】【就】【行】【了】【,】【我】【们】【又】【有】【希】【望】【了】【。】【”】【传】【播】【消】【息】【的】【同】【学】【眉】【飞】【色】【舞】【地】【说】【。】【“】【对】【呀】【,】【只】【要】【有】【一】【线】【希】【望】【,】【就】【要】【做】【百】【分】【之】【百】【的】【努】【力】【,】【我】【们】【一】【定】【能】【行】【的】【。】【”】【临】【近】【中】【考】【,】【大】【家】【诚】【心】【诚】【意】【地】【彼】【此】【鼓】【励】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【初】【四】【的】【生】【活】【仿】【佛】【是】【人】【生】【最】【扣】【人】【心】【弦】【的】【诗】【篇】【,】【紧】【张】【的】【主】【调】【让】【我】【们】【兴】【奋】【,】【灿】【烂】【的】【希】【望】【与】【我】【们】【同】【行】【。】【不】【久】【的】【将】【来】【,】【我】【相】【信】【我】【们】【会】【走】【进】【一】【个】【繁】【花】【似】【锦】【的】【春】【天】【。】【那】【时】【你】【我】【可】【能】【泪】【流】【满】【面】【,】【因】【为】【我】【们】【的】【辛】【劳】【有】【了】【回】【报】【,】【那】【是】【感】【动】【的】【泪】【水】【,】【那】【是】【幸】【福】【的】【泪】【水】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【夏】【日】【的】【夜】【晚】【格】【外】【寂】【静】【,】【霓】【虹】【灿】【烂】【,】【星】【光】【闪】【烁】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【个】【小】【女】【孩】【儿】【和】【父】【亲】【走】【在】【街】【道】【上】【。】【突】【然】【,】【女】【孩】【儿】【驻】【足】【了】【,】【静】【静】【地】【望】【着】【前】【方】【。】【父】【亲】【也】【停】【下】【脚】【步】【,】【顺】【着】【女】【儿】【的】【目】【光】【向】【前】【望】【去】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【位】【老】【者】【,】【瘫】【坐】【在】【路】【边】【,】【手】【里】【拿】【着】【一】【把】【破】【旧】【的】【二】【胡】【,】【不】【时】【传】【出】【的】【几】【个】【单】【音】【,】【凄】【凉】【而】【悲】【怆】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【女】【孩】【儿】【拉】【了】【拉】【父】【亲】【的】【衣】【角】【,】【眼】【中】【闪】【着】【动】【人】【的】【光】【亮】【:】【“】【爸】【爸】【,】【我】【们】【帮】【帮】【他】【吧】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【父】【亲】【看】【着】【女】【孩】【儿】【真】【诚】【的】【目】【光】【,】【笑】【了】【:】【“】【好】【啊】【。】【”】【然】【后】【牵】【着】【女】【孩】【儿】【的】【手】【走】【到】【老】【人】【身】【边】【。】【他】【并】【没】【有】【直】【接】【掏】【出】【钱】【来】【,】【而】【是】【慢】【慢】【蹲】【了】【下】【去】【,】【对】【老】【者】【说】【:】【“】【老】【人】【家】【,】【能】【请】【您】【为】【我】【拉】【一】【曲】【吗】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【老】【者】【一】【怔】【,】【没】【有】【想】【到】【会】【有】【人】【向】【他】【提】【出】【这】【样】【的】【要】【求】【。】【他】【微】【微】【抬】【了】【抬】【头】【,】【却】【没】【有】【睁】【开】【眼】【,】【因】【为】【他】【看】【不】【见】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【女】【孩】【儿】【的】【父】【亲】【始】【终】【微】【笑】【着】【,】【没】【有】【再】【说】【话】【。】【女】【孩】【儿】【有】【些】【不】【解】【,】【一】【双】【美】【丽】【的】【大】【眼】【睛】【不】【停】【地】【在】【老】【者】【和】【父】【亲】【之】【间】【游】【走】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【老】【者】【缓】【缓】【地】【架】【起】【了】【二】【胡】【,】【调】【好】【弦】【,】【一】【开】【始】【有】【些】【涩】【涩】【的】【,】【但】【后】【来】【,】【曲】【调】【越】【来】【越】【优】【美】【,】【老】【者】【脸】【上】【也】【渐】【渐】【显】【出】【一】【份】【平】【静】【与】【安】【详】【,】【似】【乎】【还】【能】【看】【见】【一】【抹】【淡】【淡】【的】【笑】【意】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【忧】【郁】【、】【悲】【伤】【的】【曲】【调】【转】【化】【为】【超】【脱】【的】【清】【雅】【,】【映】【着】【柔】【和】【的】【月】【光】【,】【使】【一】【切】【看】【起】【来】【那】【么】【和】【谐】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【曲】【终】【了】【,】【顺】【着】【老】【者】【苍】【老】【的】【脸】【颊】【,】【滑】【落】【两】【行】【明】【澄】【的】【泪】【水】【,】【微】【微】【反】【射】【着】【月】【亮】【的】【光】【华】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【父】【亲】【没】【有】【说】【话】【,】【放】【下】【一】【些】【钱】【,】【拉】【着】【小】【女】【孩】【儿】【的】【手】【悄】【悄】【离】【开】【了】【。】【父】【亲】【读】【懂】【了】【女】【孩】【儿】【眼】【中】【的】【困】【惑】【,】【却】【没】【有】【回】【答】【,】【只】【是】【笑】【了】【,】【示】【意】【女】【孩】【儿】【不】【要】【出】【声】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【等】【到】【走】【远】【了】【,】【父】【亲】【才】【轻】【轻】【对】【女】【儿】【说】【:】【“】【你】【要】【记】【住】【,】【同】【情】【弱】【者】【最】【好】【的】【方】【式】【不】【是】【施】【舍】【,】【那】【只】【是】【一】【个】【结】【果】【。】【你】【要】【真】【正】【去】【帮】【助】【他】【,】【就】【让】【他】【重】【拾】【对】【生】【活】【的】【希】【望】【,】【这】【才】【是】【最】【好】【的】【方】【式】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【女】【孩】【儿】【回】【头】【望】【了】【望】【远】【方】【还】【在】【遐】【思】【的】【老】【者】【,】【又】【看】【了】【看】【带】【着】【笑】【意】【的】【父】【亲】【,】【似】【懂】【非】【懂】【地】【点】【了】【点】【头】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【父】【亲】【没】【有】【再】【说】【什】【么】【,】【只】【是】【摸】【了】【摸】【女】【孩】【儿】【的】【头】【,】【又】【露】【出】【了】【那】【种】【睿】【智】【的】【笑】【容】【。】【他】【相】【信】【,】【终】【有】【一】【天】【女】【孩】【儿】【会】【真】【正】【明】【白】【,】【同】【情】【不】【是】【施】【舍】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【 】【 】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【生】【命】【需】【要】【尊】【严】【,】【当】【生】【命】【遭】【到】【无】【情】【的】【践】【踏】【时】【,】【它】【们】【会】【用】【改】【变】【、】【放】【弃】【、】【甚】【至】【死】【亡】【捍】【卫】【自】【己】【的】【尊】【严】【。】【同】【情】【是】【人】【类】【最】【基】【本】【的】【道】【德】【,】【当】【同】【情】【遭】【遇】【生】【命】【尊】【严】【时】【,】【该】【以】【怎】【样】【的】【方】【式】【去】【施】【予】【?】【本】【文】【小】【作】【者】【用】【一】【个】【童】【话】【般】【的】【美】【丽】【故】【事】【给】【了】【我】【们】【答】【案】【:】【同】【情】【不】【是】【施】【舍】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【姚】【昌】【勇】【 】【 】【刘】【爱】【华】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【丁】【香】【花】【”】【文】【学】【社】【简】【介】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【湖】【北】【省】【荆】【门】【市】【浏】【河】【中】【学】【自】【建】【校】【以】【来】【,】【始】【终】【遵】【循】【“】【求】【真】【、】【向】【善】【、】【健】【美】【、】【顽】【强】【”】【的】【校】【训】【,】【全】【面】【营】【造】【和】【谐】【的】【育】【人】【环】【境】【,】【积】【极】【开】【发】【学】【生】【心】【灵】【绿】【洲】【,】【努】【力】【点】【亮】【学】【生】【智】【慧】【明】【灯】【,】【倾】【力】【打】【造】【各】【类】【展】【示】【平】【台】【,】【真】【正】【做】【到】【了】【让】【学】【生】【“】【快】【乐】【学】【习】【、】【快】【乐】【成】【长】【、】【快】【乐】【成】【才】【”】【。】【“】【丁】【香】【花】【”】【文】【学】【社】【是】【学】【校】【重】【点】【建】【设】【的】【学】【生】【社】【团】【之】【一】【。】【自】【创】【建】【以】【来】【,】【文】【学】【社】【以】【“】【歌】【唱】【时】【代】【,】【赞】【美】【生】【活】【”】【为】【主】【旋】【律】【,】【积】【极】【倡】【导】【“】【张】【我】【个】【性】【,】【展】【我】【风】【采】【”】【的】【办】【社】【宗】【旨】【,】【涌】【现】【出】【了】【一】【大】【批】【热】【爱】【文】【学】【创】【作】【的】【学】【生】【写】【手】【,】【在】【全】【国】【、】【省】【、】【市】【等】【文】【学】【大】【赛】【活】【动】【中】【屡】【获】【大】【奖】【,】【众】【多】【作】【品】【刊】【载】【于】【各】【类】【报】【纸】【杂】【志】【,】【为】【学】【校】【赢】【得】【了】【可】【喜】【的】【荣】【誉】【,】【也】【为】【学】【生】【带】【来】【了】【巨】【大】【的】【精】【神】【享】【受】【。】【如】【今】【,】【“】【丁】【香】【花】【”】【文】【学】【社】【已】【成】【为】【荆】【门】【市】【最】【有】【影】【响】【力】【的】【校】【园】【学】【生】【文】【学】【社】【团】【之】【一】【,】【也】【成】【了】【学】【校】【特】【色】【办】【学】【的】【一】【个】【品】【牌】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】is二号头目被击毙【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【个】【体】【形】【硕】【大】【的】【蓝】【书】【包】【,】【慢】【慢】【地】【闭】【上】【了】【眼】【睛】【,】【一】【会】【儿】【就】【打】【起】【了】【震】【天】【撼】【地】【的】【呼】【噜】【,】【把】【书】【包】【里】【的】【文】【具】【们】【都】【吵】【醒】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【只】【听】【一】【块】【年】【老】【的】【橡】【皮】【说】【:】【“】【谁】【打】【这】【样】【响】【的】【呼】【噜】【,】【不】【知】【道】【我】【这】【老】【年】【人】【入】【睡】【有】【多】【么】【不】【容】【易】【吗】【?】【”】【一】【条】【直】【尺】【努】【力】【睁】【开】【自】【己】【蒙】【眬】【的】【睡】【眼】【说】【:】【“】【你】【真】【是】【老】【糊】【涂】【了】【,】【还】【不】【是】【那】【个】【整】【天】【把】【我】【们】【吃】【进】【肚】【子】【里】【,】【臀】【大】【腰】【粗】【的】【书】【包】【吗】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【时】【,】【传】【来】【一】【声】【抱】【怨】【的】【叹】【息】【声】【:】【“】【唉】【…】【…】【”】【文】【具】【们】【听】【见】【角】【落】【里】【有】【一】【支】【崭】【新】【的】【铅】【笔】【在】【唉】【声】【叹】【气】【,】【就】【问】【它】【:】【“】【新】【来】【的】【,】【你】【怎】【么】【了】【,】【年】【纪】【轻】【轻】【的】【,】【叹】【什】【么】【气】【呀】【?】【”】【这】【支】【新】【来】【的】【铅】【笔】【说】【:】【“】【你】【们】【没】【看】【见】【我】【伤】【痕】【累】【累】【的】【身】【体】【吗】【?】【今】【天】【小】【主】【人】【考】【试】【,】【遇】【到】【一】【道】【难】【题】【,】【就】【用】【他】【那】【坚】【硬】【的】【牙】【齿】【把】【我】【咬】【得】【遍】【体】【鳞】【伤】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【支】【黑】【色】【的】【签】【字】【笔】【说】【:】【“】【我】【才】【是】【最】【惨】【的】【,】【我】【整】【天】【腰】【酸】【背】【疼】【。】【”】【“】【你】【怎】【么】【这】【样】【了】【?】【”】【三】【角】【板】【问】【,】【“】【我】【每】【天】【都】【被】【小】【主】【人】【重】【用】【”】【,】【“】【按】【理】【说】【这】【是】【好】【事】【,】【但】【小】【主】【人】【不】【正】【确】【的】【书】【写】【姿】【势】【,】【每】【次】【都】【压】【得】【我】【喘】【不】【过】【气】【来】【,】【每】【一】【次】【都】【九】【死】【一】【生】【。】【”】【这】【支】【黑】【色】【的】【签】【字】【笔】【埋】【怨】【道】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【块】【年】【老】【的】【橡】【皮】【跟】【着】【说】【:】【“】【我】【们】【的】【身】【体】【本】【来】【是】【很】【适】【合】【我】【们】【工】【作】【的】【,】【但】【是】【,】【你】【们】【看】【,】【我】【现】【在】【这】【个】【狼】【狈】【样】【子】【,】【就】【是】【小】【主】【人】【不】【正】【确】【的】【使】【用】【方】【法】【造】【成】【的】【,】【他】【有】【时】【候】【还】【在】【坚】【硬】【的】【东】【西】【上】【使】【劲】【蹭】【我】【,】【我】【的】【腰】【都】【快】【要】【断】【了】【。】【”】【说】【着】【,】【老】【橡】【皮】【眼】【里】【滴】【下】【了】【浑】【浊】【的】【泪】【水】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【年】【轻】【的】【直】【尺】【说】【:】【“】【小】【主】【人】【每】【次】【用】【我】【,】【都】【要】【把】【我】【按】【得】【死】【死】【的】【,】【脊】【梁】【骨】【都】【快】【被】【他】【按】【断】【了】【。】【最】【可】【气】【的】【是】【,】【小】【主】【人】【把】【我】【涂】【得】【红】【一】【块】【,】【紫】【一】【块】【,】【我】【喘】【气】【都】【不】【痛】【快】【,】【唉】【,】【真】【苦】【呀】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【具】【们】【的】【抱】【怨】【声】【不】【知】【怎】【么】【传】【到】【了】【熟】【睡】【的】【小】【主】【人】【的】【耳】【朵】【里】【,】【钻】【进】【了】【小】【主】【人】【的】【梦】【里】【,】【小】【主】【人】【听】【得】【脸】【红】【红】【的】【,】【这】【才】【知】【道】【自】【己】【有】【这】【么】【多】【毛】【病】【,】【他】【急】【忙】【大】【声】【说】【:】【“】【对】【不】【起】【,】【对】【不】【起】【,】【我】【改】【!】【”】【这】【一】【叫】【,】【他】【醒】【来】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【只】【见】【他】【跑】【到】【书】【包】【前】【,】【小】【心】【地】【打】【开】【了】【自】【己】【的】【书】【包】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【于】【梅】【芳】【)】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【秋】【天】【还】【没】【有】【到】【,】【可】【是】【我】【已】【经】【等】【不】【及】【了】【。】【因】【为】【我】【怕】【失】【去】【你】【,】【请】【让】【我】【在】【这】【个】【夏】【日】【向】【你】【表】【白】【吧】【:】【我】【爱】【你】【,】【这】【个】【世】【界】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【曾】【经】【无】【数】【次】【抱】【怨】【过】【你】【,】【指】【责】【过】【你】【,】【因】【为】【你】【现】【实】【、】【残】【酷】【、】【无】【情】【、】【冷】【漠】【,】【曾】【经】【扼】【杀】【了】【无】【数】【人】【斑】【斓】【的】【梦】【想】【,】【曾】【经】【榨】【干】【了】【无】【数】【人】【清】【澈】【的】【眼】【泪】【,】【可】【是】【我】【却】【仍】【然】【选】【择】【爱】【你】【,】【因】【为】【我】【知】【道】【你】【是】【在】【考】【验】【这】【些】【人】【,】【只】【有】【经】【受】【考】【验】【的】【人】【才】【能】【够】【离】【成】【功】【最】【近】【。】【我】【为】【自】【己】【的】【选】【择】【感】【到】【高】【兴】【,】【因】【为】【这】【是】【我】【成】【熟】【的】【表】【现】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【第】【几】【天】【倚】【在】【窗】【前】【了】【呢】【?】【等】【结】【束】【了】【一】【段】【疲】【惫】【,】【我】【就】【如】【约】【来】【看】【你】【了】【。】【我】【送】【你】【脉】【脉】【的】【眼】【眸】【,】【你】【还】【我】【清】【风】【的】【拥】【抱】【。】【我】【是】【你】【树】【梢】【上】【一】【片】【早】【黄】【的】【薄】【叶】【,】【你】【却】【是】【我】【人】【生】【的】【整】【片】【阴】【凉】【。】【你】【的】【阳】【光】【启】【动】【我】【温】【暖】【的】【心】【跳】【,】【你】【的】【繁】【星】【抚】【平】【我】【白】【昼】【的】【伤】【口】【。】【我】【会】【孤】【单】【,】【可】【你】【不】【会】【。】【我】【会】【流】【泪】【,】【可】【你】【不】【会】【。】【所】【以】【,】【我】【要】【把】【你】【作】【为】【我】【的】【依】【靠】【,】【有】【了】【你】【的】【指】【引】【,】【我】【永】【远】【都】【不】【会】【忘】【记】【前】【行】【的】【方】【向】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【当】【晚】【霞】【走】【失】【在】【夕】【阳】【中】【的】【时】【候】【,】【我】【会】【沉】【默】【地】【注】【视】【这】【片】【晴】【朗】【的】【天】【空】【。】【很】【多】【时】【候】【都】【是】【看】【似】【冰】【冷】【而】【实】【则】【温】【暖】【的】【你】【为】【我】【营】【造】【出】【一】【座】【让】【我】【钟】【爱】【的】【小】【城】【。】【这】【里】【有】【山】【有】【水】【,】【有】【明】【月】【,】【有】【荒】【凉】【也】【有】【温】【暖】【。】【我】【感】【谢】【你】【,】【是】【你】【替】【我】【隔】【绝】【了】【嘲】【笑】【,】【让】【我】【看】【到】【了】【自】【信】【。】【是】【你】【为】【我】【阻】【挡】【了】【陌】【生】【,】【为】【我】【分】【出】【一】【块】【心】【灵】【的】【岛】【屿】【。】【我】【就】【喜】【欢】【独】【自】【活】【在】【这】【座】【城】【中】【,】【看】【光】【阴】【在】【上】【空】【穿】【梭】【,】【看】【云】【朵】【滑】【过】【晴】【空】【的】【涟】【漪】【,】【荡】【出】【寂】【寞】【的】【弧】【线】【、】【断】【点】【,】【在】【城】【的】【尽】【头】【无】【限】【延】【伸】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【是】【不】【会】【累】【的】【,】【对】【吧】【?】【听】【着】【汽】【车】【的】【聒】【噪】【,】【放】【学】【铃】【声】【的】【轰】【鸣】【,】【叶】【子】【尖】【锐】【的】【旋】【律】【,】【你】【都】【没】【有】【说】【过】【一】【个】【“】【不】【”】【字】【。】【我】【从】【心】【里】【把】【你】【当】【做】【王】【者】【,】【你】【从】【未】【有】【过】【慌】【乱】【,】【从】【未】【有】【过】【动】【摇】【,】【从】【未】【有】【过】【懒】【惰】【。】【是】【你】【教】【会】【了】【我】【勇】【敢】【,】【所】【以】【我】【才】【能】【够】【坐】【在】【窗】【前】【听】【雷】【、】【看】【闪】【电】【,】【克】【服】【曾】【有】【过】【的】【恐】【惧】【与】【胆】【怯】【;】【是】【你】【教】【会】【了】【我】【执】【著】【,】【所】【以】【我】【才】【会】【不】【停】【地】【行】【走】【在】【荒】【芜】【的】【路】【上】【,】【去】【追】【逐】【我】【的】【理】【想】【;】【是】【你】【教】【会】【了】【我】【勤】【奋】【,】【所】【以】【我】【才】【会】【在】【夜】【半】【奋】【笔】【疾】【书】【,】【去】【为】【进】【入】【象】【牙】【塔】【而】【奋】【斗】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【个】【多】【彩】【的】【世】【界】【,】【我】【爱】【你】【。】【因】【为】【我】【活】【在】【离】【你】【心】【脏】【最】【近】【的】【位】【置】【上】【。】【我】【可】【以】【听】【到】【你】【的】【呼】【吸】【,】【感】【受】【着】【你】【的】【心】【跳】【。】【能】【够】【陪】【我】【走】【过】【一】【生】【风】【雨】【的】【人】【恐】【怕】【只】【有】【你】【了】【,】【于】【是】【,】【在】【那】【些】【茫】【茫】【的】【征】【途】【上】【,】【哪】【怕】【只】【有】【我】【一】【个】【人】【,】【我】【也】【不】【再】【害】【怕】【孤】【单】【与】【寂】【寞】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【爱】【你】【,】【不】【光】【是】【因】【为】【你】【有】【四】【季】【分】【明】【的】【轮】【廓】【,】【更】【重】【要】【的】【是】【,】【你】【让】【我】【懂】【得】【了】【那】【些】【难】【懂】【的】【人】【生】【课】【题】【,】【你】【是】【我】【生】【命】【中】【的】【一】【部】【分】【,】【我】【会】【一】【直】【深】【爱】【你】【,】【直】【到】【永】【远】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【标】【题】【富】【有】【新】【意】【,】【能】【吸】【引】【读】【者】【的】【目】【光】【,】【这】【个】【标】【题】【就】【仿】【佛】【文】【章】【的】【眼】【睛】【,】【一】【双】【明】【亮】【的】【大】【眼】【睛】【总】【是】【最】【能】【够】【吸】【引】【人】【。】【文】【章】【抒】【情】【色】【彩】【浓】【郁】【,】【能】【够】【在】【抒】【情】【中】【表】【达】【对】【世】【界】【的】【喜】【爱】【之】【情】【。】【文】【章】【语】【言】【生】【动】【,】【作】【者】【使】【用】【了】【拟】【人】【和】【排】【比】【等】【修】【辞】【手】【法】【,】【增】【加】【了】【文】【章】【的】【生】【动】【性】【。】【结】【尾】【处】【能】【够】【呼】【应】【标】【题】【,】【做】【到】【了】【首】【尾】【呼】【应】【。】【作】【者】【构】【思】【巧】【妙】【,】【想】【象】【大】【胆】【,】【能】【够】【冲】【破】【条】【条】【框】【框】【的】【束】【缚】【,】【真】【正】【张】【扬】【了】【自】【己】【的】【个】【性】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【何】【秀】【珍】【)】is二号头目被击毙【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【周】【围】【的】【一】【切】【是】【多】【么】【美】【好】【!】【可】【是】【,】【她】【什】【么】【也】【看】【不】【见】【。】【蓝】【色】【的】【天】【空】【,】【绿】【色】【的】【草】【地】【,】【红】【色】【的】【花】【朵】【…】【…】【对】【她】【来】【说】【,】【这】【些】【只】【是】【个】【美】【丽】【的】【幻】【想】【。】【但】【,】【在】【她】【脑】【海】【中】【,】【出】【现】【最】【多】【的】【还】【是】【绿】【色】【。】【因】【为】【妈】【妈】【曾】【告】【诉】【她】【,】【她】【生】【长】【的】【地】【方】【有】【大】【片】【大】【片】【绿】【茵】【茵】【的】【草】【地】【,】【她】【常】【常】【用】【手】【去】【触】【摸】【,】【用】【心】【去】【想】【象】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【她】【才】【7】【岁】【,】【生】【着】【一】【张】【娃】【娃】【脸】【,】【粉】【嫩】【粉】【嫩】【的】【,】【扎】【着】【两】【个】【小】【辫】【子】【,】【美】【丽】【得】【像】【一】【个】【天】【使】【。】【可】【是】【,】【她】【的】【眼】【睛】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【一】【天】【,】【她】【坐】【在】【门】【前】【,】【听】【着】【路】【人】【的】【脚】【步】【声】【,】【由】【远】【到】【近】【,】【再】【由】【近】【到】【远】【。】【她】【忽】【然】【听】【见】【一】【个】【稚】【嫩】【的】【声】【音】【说】【:】【“】【唉】【,】【快】【点】【!】【上】【课】【了】【!】【不】【然】【迟】【到】【了】【!】【”】【她】【听】【后】【默】【默】【无】【语】【。】【回】【到】【家】【,】【劈】【头】【一】【句】【:】【“】【妈】【妈】【,】【我】【要】【上】【学】【。】【”】【说】【得】【那】【么】【坚】【决】【,】【认】【真】【。】【妈】【妈】【愣】【住】【了】【,】【眼】【睛】【里】【溢】【出】【辛】【酸】【的】【眼】【泪】【。】【她】【不】【想】【打】【击】【孩】【子】【。】【妈】【妈】【擦】【干】【了】【眼】【泪】【,】【摸】【摸】【孩】【子】【的】【脑】【袋】【,】【说】【:】【“】【好】【,】【妈】【妈】【带】【你】【去】【上】【学】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【路】【上】【,】【妈】【妈】【不】【断】【地】【擦】【拭】【眼】【泪】【,】【孩】【子】【则】【兴】【奋】【地】【嚷】【着】【:】【“】【我】【要】【去】【上】【学】【!】【上】【学】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【到】【了】【学】【校】【,】【老】【师】【询】【问】【了】【一】【些】【话】【,】【很】【同】【情】【这】【个】【小】【女】【孩】【。】【但】【她】【也】【不】【能】【收】【下】【这】【个】【小】【女】【孩】【。】【小】【女】【孩】【哭】【着】【、】【坚】【决】【地】【对】【妈】【妈】【说】【:】【“】【妈】【妈】【,】【我】【想】【上】【学】【。】【”】【老】【师】【听】【了】【也】【不】【禁】【流】【下】【眼】【泪】【…】【…】【就】【这】【样】【,】【在】【老】【师】【的】【帮】【助】【下】【,】【校】【长】【终】【于】【决】【定】【收】【下】【这】【个】【小】【女】【孩】【。】【但】【什】【么】【手】【续】【也】【没】【办】【,】【也】【只】【能】【如】【此】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【以】【后】【,】【老】【师】【便】【成】【了】【小】【女】【孩】【的】【“】【随】【从】【”】【,】【尽】【心】【照】【顾】【她】【,】【辅】【导】【她】【,】【小】【女】【孩】【因】【此】【觉】【得】【很】【快】【乐】【。】【她】【非】【常】【喜】【欢】【这】【位】【温】【柔】【善】【良】【的】【女】【老】【师】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【一】【次】【,】【课】【堂】【上】【老】【师】【一】【遍】【一】【遍】【带】【同】【学】【们】【朗】【读】【《】【草】【》】【。】【老】【师】【问】【:】【“】【你】【们】【知】【道】【小】【草】【是】【什】【么】【颜】【色】【的】【吗】【?】【”】【“】【我】【知】【道】【!】【小】【草】【是】【绿】【色】【的】【!】【”】【小】【女】【孩】【自】【信】【地】【回】【答】【道】【。】【“】【你】【真】【聪】【明】【!】【那】【么】【你】【知】【道】【绿】【色】【是】【什】【么】【样】【的】【吗】【?】【”】【老】【师】【走】【到】【她】【面】【前】【,】【那】【般】【不】【经】【意】【地】【抓】【起】【她】【的】【小】【手】【,】【从】【自】【己】【手】【里】【抽】【出】【一】【张】【绿】【色】【的】【卡】【片】【给】【她】【。】【“】【对】【了】【,】【这】【就】【是】【绿】【色】【,】【你】【真】【棒】【!】【”】【随】【即】【,】【教】【室】【里】【响】【起】【一】【片】【热】【烈】【的】【掌】【声】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【绿】【色】【是】【什】【么】【样】【子】【的】【呢】【?】【小】【女】【孩】【仍】【然】【不】【知】【道】【。】【在】【她】【内】【心】【,】【这】【,】【成】【了】【一】【份】【期】【待】【,】【一】【份】【绿】【色】【的】【期】【待】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【篇】【半】【命】【题】【作】【文】【,】【小】【作】【者】【大】【胆】【地】【选】【择】【了】【一】【个】【不】【太】【好】【驾】【驭】【的】【对】【象】【—】【—】【绿】【色】【。】【小】【作】【者】【在】【叙】【事】【中】【,】【向】【我】【们】【讲】【述】【了】【一】【个】【关】【于】【“】【绿】【色】【期】【待】【”】【的】【感】【人】【故】【事】【。】【文】【章】【通】【过】【运】【用】【多】【种】【描】【写】【手】【法】【,】【突】【出】【了】【小】【女】【孩】【的】【纯】【真】【可】【爱】【。】【语】【言】【简】【洁】【有】【感】【情】【,】【别】【有】【一】【种】【打】【动】【人】【心】【的】【力】【量】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【钱】【之】【俊】【)】

is二号头目被击毙:山东寿光降雨未停弥河漫堤

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【原】【文】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【成】【长】【中】【的】【难】【忘】【故】【事】【 】【晓】【晴】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【题】【目】【是】【文】【章】【的】【眼】【睛】【,】【这】【个】【题】【目】【太】【宽】【泛】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【天】【是】【政】【治】【早】【读】【课】【,】【教】【室】【是】【嗡】【嗡】【的】【读】【书】【声】【。】【穆】【珠】【珠】【最】【讨】【厌】【政】【治】【早】【读】【了】【,】【这】【读】【书】【声】【像】【一】【首】【首】【催】【眠】【曲】【,】【他】【趴】【在】【桌】【上】【睡】【着】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【他】【的】【伙】【伴】【瘦】【猴】【搞】【了】【恶】【作】【剧】【,】【画】【了】【一】【头】【胖】【得】【有】【些】【夸】【张】【的】【肥】【猪】【,】【用】【透】【明】【胶】【粘】【在】【他】【的】【后】【背】【上】【。】【同】【学】【们】【哄】【地】【大】【笑】【起】【来】【,】【此】【时】【已】【见】【周】【公】【的】【他】【哪】【里】【知】【道】【?】【正】【在】【批】【改】【作】【业】【的】【政】【治】【老】【师】【“】【眼】【镜】【蛇】【”】【很】【快】【走】【过】【来】【,】【扯】【下】【那】【张】【糟】【糕】【的】【猪】【画】【与】【同】【学】【们】【一】【起】【笑】【起】【来】【。】【她】【要】【拉】【他】【罚】【站】【,】【大】【家】【笑】【得】【喘】【不】【过】【气】【来】【。】【待】【他】【明】【白】【他】【与】【那】【个】【肥】【猪】【的】【联】【系】【时】【,】【他】【扒】【拉】【掉】【了】【她】【的】【大】【眼】【镜】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【自】【然】【,】【班】【主】【任】【那】【国】【字】【脸】【气】【得】【变】【了】【形】【:】【“】【你】【小】【子】【好】【大】【胆】【子】【,】【睡】【觉】【不】【说】【还】【弄】【掉】【政】【治】【老】【师】【的】【眼】【镜】【!】【”】【穆】【珠】【珠】【也】【是】【头】【驴】【,】【一】【阵】【莫】【名】【其】【妙】【的】【冲】【动】【聚】【在】【了】【脑】【门】【:】【“】【我】【是】【穆】【珠】【珠】【,】【我】【不】【是】【穆】【猪】【猪】【!】【”】【穆】【珠】【珠】【吼】【起】【来】【。】【他】【为】【自】【己】【找】【个】【理】【由】【,】【尽】【管】【我】【成】【绩】【不】【好】【,】【但】【不】【是】【那】【又】【肥】【又】【蠢】【的】【懒】【猪】【!】【于】【是】【他】【朝】【着】【室】【外】【走】【去】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【看】【门】【老】【头】【儿】【拦】【他】【的】【时】【候】【,】【他】【脸】【涨】【得】【通】【红】【。】【他】【动】【了】【拳】【头】【,】【砸】【在】【老】【头】【儿】【肚】【子】【上】【,】【老】【头】【儿】【捂】【肚】【子】【的】【间】【隙】【他】【才】【得】【以】【逃】【脱】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【他】【就】【这】【样】【到】【了】【一】【个】【网】【吧】【。】【网】【吧】【主】【人】【是】【个】【染】【过】【头】【发】【但】【褪】【了】【颜】【色】【、】【让】【人】【一】【看】【就】【生】【厌】【的】【女】【人】【。】【但】【穆】【珠】【珠】【顾】【不】【了】【这】【些】【,】【他】【打】【开】【“】【飞】【龙】【”】【游】【戏】【,】【很】【快】【忘】【记】【了】【刚】【才】【发】【生】【的】【一】【切】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【这】【个】【细】【节】【与】【文】【章】【主】【旨】【联】【系】【不】【大】【,】【应】【删】【去】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【就】【这】【样】【到】【了】【第】【二】【天】【清】【晨】【。】【从】【网】【吧】【一】【出】【来】【,】【穆】【珠】【殊】【肿】【着】【眼】【睛】【。】【天】【还】【未】【大】【亮】【,】【在】【经】【过】【长】【脸】【九】【叔】【的】【炸】【锅】【时】【,】【他】【拿】【了】【两】【个】【韭】【菜】【饼】【后】【便】【朝】【学】【校】【走】【去】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【此】【处】【对】【穆】【珠】【珠】【“】【肿】【着】【眼】【睛】【”】【的】【细】【节】【描】【述】【不】【够】【生】【动】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【来】【。】【他】【就】【不】【想】【辍】【学】【。】【他】【恨】【一】【去】【打】【工】【就】【是】【好】【几】【年】【的】【爸】【爸】【,】【恨】【因】【为】【爸】【爸】【同】【一】【个】【“】【狐】【狸】【精】【”】【在】【一】【起】【就】【抛】【下】【他】【去】【找】【爸】【爸】【的】【妈】【妈】【,】【他】【恨】【政】【治】【老】【师】【,】【恨】【班】【主】【任】【,】【他】【恨】【瘦】【猴】【,】【恨】【看】【门】【老】【头】【儿】【,】【恨】【班】【上】【的】【同】【学】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【路】【边】【树】【枝】【上】【的】【几】【只】【乌】【鸦】【又】【朝】【着】【他】【“】【喳】【喳】【”】【地】【叫】【起】【来】【。】【好】【多】【次】【,】【他】【和】【瘦】【猴】【用】【路】【边】【的】【石】【块】【攻】【击】【乌】【鸦】【窝】【。】【穆】【珠】【珠】【把】【剩】【下】【的】【饼】【子】【撕】【成】【小】【块】【儿】【扔】【在】【敞】【亮】【的】【路】【面】【上】【,】【乌】【鸦】【们】【在】【树】【枝】【上】【跳】【来】【跳】【去】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【此】【段】【很】【有】【生】【趣】【,】【可】【以】【写】【得】【更】【生】【动】【点】【儿】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【到】【校】【门】【口】【,】【大】【肚】【皮】【老】【头】【儿】【躺】【在】【藤】【椅】【上】【正】【打】【瞌】【睡】【。】【他】【有】【些】【犹】【豫】【,】【昨】【天】【他】【冲】【出】【门】【口】【的】【时】【候】【,】【一】【拳】【砸】【在】【老】【头】【儿】【的】【啤】【酒】【肚】【上】【。】【正】【是】【趁】【他】【捂】【肚】【子】【的】【间】【隙】【才】【得】【以】【逃】【脱】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【正】【当】【他】【犹】【豫】【之】【时】【,】【老】【头】【儿】【突】【然】【醒】【了】【,】【跳】【过】【来】【一】【把】【扯】【住】【穆】【珠】【珠】【:】【“】【你】【小】【子】【真】【够】【损】【的】【,】【快】【进】【来】【,】【快】【进】【来】【,】【你】【们】【班】【主】【任】【、】【政】【治】【老】【师】【一】【夜】【没】【合】【眼】【找】【你】【呢】【!】【”】【随】【即】【他】【又】【讲】【了】【好】【多】【与】【老】【师】【顶】【撞】【是】【坏】【孩】【子】【及】【其】【受】【到】【的】【惩】【罚】【,】【教】【育】【他】【要】【听】【老】【师】【的】【话】【,】【好】【好】【读】【书】【。】【这】【让】【穆】【珠】【珠】【听】【得】【有】【些】【心】【烦】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【写】【“】【老】【头】【儿】【”】【语】【言】【可】【更】【细】【致】【些】【,】【“】【教】【育】【他】【”】【的】【叙】【写】【流】【于】【说】【教】【,】【太】【空】【泛】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【当】【他】【走】【进】【教】【室】【时】【,】【正】【上】【旱】【读】【课】【,】【教】【室】【里】【“】【嗡】【嗡】【”】【声】【一】【片】【。】【瘦】【猴】【最】【先】【跑】【过】【来】【,】【讨】【好】【地】【说】【:】【“】【穆】【珠】【珠】【,】【开】【个】【玩】【笑】【,】【用】【得】【着】【那】【样】【吗】【?】【要】【不】【你】【画】【个】【大】【肥】【猪】【让】【我】【背】【着】【…】【…】【”】【他】【还】【要】【说】【下】【去】【,】【门】【“】【吱】【呀】【”】【开】【了】【,】【他】【赶】【紧】【溜】【回】【座】【位】【。】【班】【主】【任】【来】【了】【,】【他】【铁】【着】【那】【国】【字】【脸】【,】【在】【教】【室】【里】【“】【巡】【视】【”】【了】【一】【圈】【,】【但】【并】【未】【发】【脾】【气】【,】【更】【没】【有】【找】【他】【谈】【话】【。】【政】【治】【老】【师】【也】【进】【了】【教】【室】【,】【戴】【着】【眼】【镜】【,】【停】【在】【穆】【珠】【珠】【面】【前】【一】【会】【儿】【,】【又】【到】【讲】【台】【上】【批】【改】【作】【业】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【一】【天】【的】【事】【好】【像】【没】【发】【生】【过】【一】【样】【。】【只】【是】【他】【不】【明】【白】【老】【师】【们】【为】【什】【么】【不】【狠】【狠】【地】【批】【评】【他】【呢】【?】【在】【他】【心】【中】【一】【直】【是】【个】【谜】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【结】【尾】【的】【“】【谜】【”】【使】【主】【旨】【不】【明】【,】【此】【为】【文】【章】【之】【忌】【,】【应】【用】【含】【有】【哲】【理】【的】【词】【句】【点】【出】【来】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【原】【文】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【此】【文】【最】【大】【的】【问】【题】【是】【结】【构】【上】【平】【铺】【直】【叙】【,】【不】【吸】【引】【人】【。】【我】【们】【可】【梳】【理】【本】【文】【情】【节】【为】【:】【早】【课】【打】【瞌】【睡】【一】【瘦】【猴】【恶】【作】【剧】【—】【反】【叛】【俩】【老】【师】【一】【冲】【撞】【老】【门】【卫】【一】【一】【夜】【泡】【网】【吧】【—】【再】【回】【上】【学】【路】【一】【回】【校】【得】【谅】【解】【。】【若】【我】【们】【以】【穆】【珠】【珠】【从】【网】【吧】【出】【来】【写】【起】【,】【把】【主】【人】【公】【置】【身】【于】【上】【学】【路】【上】【,】【然】【后】【把】【已】【发】【生】【的】【故】【事】【穿】【插】【进】【来】【,】【再】【到】【校】【门】【口】【门】【卫】【老】【头】【的】【叮】【嘱】【、】【老】【师】【们】【的】【“】【冷】【处】【理】【”】【,】【最】【后】【点】【题】【,】【文】【章】【就】【会】【深】【刻】【、】【生】【动】【得】【多】【。】【同】【时】【,】【文】【中】【对】【给】【老】【师】【起】【的】【不】【雅】【称】【号】【也】【使】【文】【章】【失】【色】【不】【少】【,】【大】【大】【降】【低】【了】【文】【章】【的】【品】【味】【,】【同】【学】【们】【在】【写】【作】【时】【应】【该】【注】【意】【这】【方】【面】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【修】【改】【后】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【没】【有】【不】【长】【疤】【的】【树】【 】【晓】【晴】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【用】【文】【尾】【点】【明】【题】【旨】【的】【语】【句】【作】【题】【目】【,】【含】【蓄】【而】【又】【吸】【引】【读】【者】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【从】【网】【吧】【一】【出】【来】【,】【穆】【珠】【珠】【赶】【紧】【把】【眼】【睛】【闭】【上】【,】【好】【一】【阵】【子】【,】【他】【那】【单】【薄】【的】【眼】【皮】【才】【把】【红】【肿】【的】【眼】【球】【放】【出】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【一】【个】【“】【放】【”】【字】【写】【出】【泡】【一】【夜】【网】【吧】【的】【穆】【珠】【珠】【的】【情】【态】【,】【形】【象】【逼】【真】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【天】【还】【未】【大】【亮】【。】【长】【脸】【九】【叔】【炸】【锅】【的】【灶】【膛】【已】【舔】【着】【火】【苗】【。】【穆】【珠】【珠】【拿】【了】【两】【个】【韭】【菜】【饼】【懒】【懒】【地】【朝】【学】【校】【走】【去】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【来】【,】【他】【今】【天】【是】【不】【准】【备】【上】【学】【的】【,】【只】【是】【那】【两】【条】【腿】【不】【听】【使】【唤】【倔】【强】【地】【要】【走】【他】【多】【年】【所】【走】【的】【路】【。】【他】【恨】【爸】【爸】【,】【一】【去】【打】【工】【就】【是】【好】【几】【年】【;】【他】【恨】【妈】【妈】【,】【她】【怕】【爸】【爸】【与】【“】【狐】【狸】【精】【”】【在】【一】【起】【就】【狠】【心】【抛】【下】【他】【去】【了】【爸】【爸】【那】【儿】【;】【他】【恨】【政】【治】【老】【师】【,】【恨】【她】【眼】【镜】【边】【那】【鄙】【夷】【嘲】【笑】【的】【冷】【光】【;】【他】【恨】【班】【主】【任】【,】【恨】【那】【木】【着】【的】【“】【国】【字】【脸】【”】【,】【仿】【佛】【马】【上】【在】【那】【黑】【黑】【的】【脸】【膛】【上】【长】【出】【绿】【苔】【来】【;】【他】【恨】【那】【俩】【门】【牙】【像】【开】【山】【大】【斧】【的】【“】【瘦】【猴】【”】【,】【恨】【那】【个】【挺】【着】【脾】【酒】【肚】【的】【看】【门】【老】【头】【儿】【,】【恨】【班】【上】【的】【同】【学】【…】【…】【总】【之】【,】【他】【恨】【所】【有】【人】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【还】【是】【把】【时】【间】【的】【轮】【子】【拉】【回】【到】【昨】【天】【的】【这】【个】【时】【候】【。】【伴】【随】【着】【教】【室】【里】【“】【嗡】【嗡】【”】【的】【读】【书】【声】【,】【他】【恹】【恹】【欲】【睡】【,】【特】【别】【是】【欧】【朝】【朝】【那】【一】【遍】【又】【一】【遍】【的】【“】【公】【民】【权】【利】【指】【的】【是】【由】【宪】【法】【和】【法】【律】【确】【认】【并】【赋】【予】【公】【民】【享】【有】【的】【某】【种】【权】【益】【”】【简】【直】【就】【是】【一】【条】【条】【瞌】【睡】【虫】【,】【穆】【珠】【珠】【再】【也】【忍】【不】【住】【了】【,】【站】【在】【桌】【上】【的】【课】【本】【疲】【惫】【地】【倒】【在】【脸】【上】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【不】【是】【“】【瘦】【猴】【”】【让】【他】【身】【上】【背】【上】【那】【张】【胖】【得】【有】【些】【夸】【张】【的】【肥】【猪】【,】【同】【学】【们】【肯】【定】【不】【会】【注】【意】【到】【在】【墙】【角】【处】【见】【周】【公】【的】【他】【:】【如】【果】【同】【学】【们】【不】【停】【止】【读】【书】【,】【那】【埋】【头】【批】【改】【作】【业】【的】【“】【眼】【镜】【蛇】【”】【也】【就】【不】【会】【发】【现】【他】【背】【着】【“】【肥】【猪】【”】【睡】【觉】【;】【如】【果】【她】【未】【发】【现】【他】【睡】【觉】【,】【她】【就】【不】【会】【拿】【着】【那】【张】【糟】【糕】【的】【猪】【画】【与】【同】【学】【们】【一】【起】【发】【笑】【;】【如】【果】【她】【不】【笑】【他】【,】【他】【也】【就】【不】【会】【在】【她】【拉】【他】【罚】【站】【的】【瞬】【间】【扒】【拉】【掉】【她】【的】【眼】【镜】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【穆】【珠】【珠】【就】【这】【样】【猜】【想】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【此】【处】【用】【主】【人】【公】【的】【“】【猜】【想】【”】【将】【所】【发】【生】【的】【细】【节】【故】【事】【点】【出】【来】【,】【且】【合】【乎】【人】【物】【心】【理】【,】【很】【有】【韵】【味】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【自】【然】【。】【班】【主】【任】【老】【人】【家】【那】【“】【国】【字】【脸】【”】【上】【的】【青】【苔】【泛】【了】【绿】【。】【“】【我】【是】【穆】【珠】【珠】【,】【我】【不】【是】【穆】【猪】【猪】【!】【”】【穆】【珠】【珠】【吼】【起】【来】【。】【他】【为】【自】【己】【找】【个】【理】【由】【,】【尽】【管】【我】【成】【绩】【不】【好】【,】【但】【也】【不】【是】【那】【又】【肥】【又】【蠢】【的】【懒】【猪】【,】【既】【然】【你】【们】【取】【笑】【本】【少】【爷】【,】【我】【也】【就】【拼】【了】【!】【于】【是】【他】【把】【书】【包】【潇】【洒】【地】【搭】【在】【背】【上】【,】【朝】【着】【教】【室】【外】【走】【去】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【阵】【阵】【凉】【风】【让】【他】【有】【些】【惬】【意】【。】【路】【边】【树】【枝】【上】【的】【几】【只】【乌】【鸦】【又】【朝】【着】【他】【喳】【喳】【地】【叫】【起】【来】【。】【他】【知】【道】【这】【些】【乌】【鸦】【记】【着】【仇】【呢】【,】【好】【多】【次】【,】【他】【和】【“】【瘦】【猴】【”】【用】【路】【边】【的】【石】【块】【攻】【击】【乌】【鸦】【窝】【,】【这】【些】【家】【伙】【就】【不】【服】【软】【地】【与】【他】【们】【吵】【架】【。】【穆】【珠】【珠】【把】【剩】【下】【的】【饼】【子】【撕】【成】【小】【块】【扔】【在】【敞】【亮】【的】【路】【面】【上】【,】【乌】【鸦】【们】【警】【惕】【地】【在】【树】【枝】【上】【跳】【来】【跳】【去】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【些】【声】【音】【听】【起】【来】【虽】【然】【似】【吵】【架】【却】【又】【有】【一】【颗】【敏】【感】【的】【心】【呢】【,】【穆】【珠】【珠】【觉】【得】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【把】【乌】【鸦】【写】【成】【“】【不】【服】【软】【地】【与】【他】【们】【吵】【架】【”】【,】【符】【合】【儿】【童】【心】【理】【。】【“】【穆】【珠】【珠】【觉】【得】【”】【一】【段】【,】【正】【是】【主】【人】【公】【内】【心】【的】【写】【照】【与】【暗】【示】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【到】【校】【门】【口】【,】【大】【肚】【皮】【老】【头】【儿】【正】【躺】【在】【藤】【椅】【上】【打】【瞌】【睡】【。】【他】【有】【些】【犹】【豫】【,】【昨】【天】【他】【冲】【出】【门】【口】【的】【时】【候】【,】【一】【拳】【砸】【在】【老】【头】【儿】【的】【啤】【酒】【肚】【上】【,】【正】【是】【趁】【他】【捂】【肚】【子】【的】【间】【隙】【才】【得】【以】【逃】【脱】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【正】【当】【他】【犹】【豫】【之】【时】【,】【老】【头】【儿】【神】【奇】【地】【醒】【了】【,】【跳】【过】【来】【一】【把】【扯】【住】【穆】【珠】【珠】【的】【胳】【膊】【:】【“】【你】【小】【子】【真】【够】【损】【的】【,】【快】【进】【来】【,】【快】【进】【来】【,】【你】【们】【班】【主】【任】【、】【政】【治】【老】【师】【一】【夜】【没】【合】【眼】【找】【你】【呢】【!】【”】【他】【朝】【教】【室】【走】【的】【时】【候】【,】【背】【后】【还】【传】【来】【老】【头】【儿】【的】【喊】【声】【:】【“】【孩】【子】【,】【给】【老】【师】【认】【个】【错】【,】【可】【要】【听】【话】【呀】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【“】【老】【头】【儿】【”】【的】【神】【态】【与】【语】【言】【写】【得】【比】【较】【真】【切】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【正】【上】【早】【读】【,】【教】【室】【里】【“】【嗡】【嗡】【”】【声】【一】【片】【。】【“】【瘦】【猴】【”】【凑】【过】【来】【,】【两】【个】【门】【牙】【闪】【着】【白】【光】【:】【“】【兄】【弟】【,】【开】【个】【玩】【笑】【,】【用】【得】【着】【像】【个】【爆】【筒】【吗】【?】【要】【不】【你】【画】【个】【大】【肥】【猪】【让】【我】【背】【着】【…】【…】【”】【他】【还】【要】【说】【下】【去】【,】【门】【“】【吱】【呀】【”】【开】【了】【,】【他】【赶】【紧】【溜】【回】【座】【位】【。】【班】【主】【任】【来】【了】【,】【他】【有】【些】【疲】【惫】【,】【仍】【背】【着】【手】【,】【铁】【着】【那】【“】【国】【字】【脸】【”】【,】【在】【教】【室】【里】【“】【巡】【视】【”】【。】【政】【治】【老】【师】【也】【进】【了】【教】【室】【,】【镜】【片】【上】【仿】【佛】【凝】【着】【水】【气】【,】【停】【在】【穆】【珠】【珠】【面】【前】【片】【刻】【,】【就】【又】【回】【到】【讲】【台】【上】【批】【改】【作】【业】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【一】【天】【的】【事】【仿】【佛】【是】【一】【场】【梦】【,】【穆】【珠】【珠】【也】【变】【成】【了】【一】【个】【好】【孩】【子】【。】【偶】【尔】【同】【学】【们】【也】【调】【侃】【他】【“】【我】【是】【穆】【珠】【珠】【,】【不】【是】【穆】【猪】【猪】【”】【,】【他】【有】【些】【羞】【赧】【。】【只】【是】【他】【不】【明】【白】【老】【师】【们】【为】【什】【么】【不】【狠】【狠】【地】【批】【评】【他】【呢】【?】【所】【以】【有】【一】【天】【他】【趁】【政】【治】【老】【师】【批】【改】【作】【业】【时】【开】【了】【口】【。】【政】【治】【老】【师】【好】【像】【心】【不】【在】【焉】【,】【生】【生】【地】【来】【了】【一】【句】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【哪】【棵】【树】【没】【有】【疤】【呢】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【“】【生】【生】【地】【”】【说】【出】【的】【这】【句】【话】【揭】【示】【了】【深】【刻】【的】【主】【题】【,】【让】【人】【怦】【然】【心】【动】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【改】【后】【评】【语】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【升】【格】【后】【的】【特】【色】【:】【一】【是】【情】【节】【上】【打】【破】【常】【规】【。】【作】【文】【由】【网】【吧】【出】【来】【写】【起】【,】【在】【上】【学】【路】【上】【“】【把】【时】【间】【的】【轮】【子】【拉】【回】【到】【昨】【天】【的】【这】【个】【时】【候】【”】【,】【然】【后】【再】【回】【到】【路】【上】【,】【到】【校】【门】【口】【又】【勾】【起】【前】【—】【天】【与】【看】【门】【老】【头】【儿】【的】【矛】【盾】【,】【以】【“】【老】【头】【儿】【神】【奇】【地】【醒】【了】【…】【…】【”】【又】【回】【到】【正】【题】【。】【情】【节】【让】【人】【耳】【目】【—】【新】【。】【二】【是】【立】【意】【上】【以】【小】【见】【大】【。】【小】【插】【曲】【折】【射】【大】【道】【理】【,】【文】【章】【结】【尾】【处】【用】【富】【有】【哲】【理】【的】【文】【字】【“】【哪】【棵】【树】【没】【有】【疤】【呢】【”】【直】【接】【点】【出】【文】【章】【的】【立】【意】【所】【在】【。】【三】【是】【语】【言】【上】【更】【细】【腻】【、】【生】【动】【、】【个】【性】【化】【。】【特】【别】【是】【神】【态】【、】【心】【理】【、】【景】【物】【等】【描】【写】【语】【句】【。】is二号头目被击毙【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【家】【窗】【外】【摆】【放】【着】【几】【盆】【水】【竹】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 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】【“】【花】【有】【重】【开】【日】【,】【人】【无】【再】【少】【年】【。】【”】【刚】【步】【入】【花】【季】【岁】【月】【的】【我】【,】【须】【好】【好】【地】【珍】【惜】【自】【己】【的】【青】【春】【年】【华】【。】【她】【还】【告】【诫】【我】【:】【 】【“】【宝】【剑】【锋】【从】【磨】【砺】【出】【,】【梅】【花】【香】【自】【苦】【寒】【来】【。】【”】【一】【个】【人】【,】【要】【想】【有】【所】【作】【为】【,】【须】【不】【畏】【挫】【折】【与】【艰】【难】【,】【要】【经】【受】【得】【住】【痛】【苦】【的】【磨】【炼】【与】【失】【败】【的】【打】【击】【,】【应】【懂】【得】【“】【善】【败】【者】【恒】【成】【”】【的】【道】【理】【,】【在】【逆】【境】【中】【须】【愈】【挫】【愈】【勇】【,】【百】【折】【不】【挠】【,】【奋】【发】【努】【力】【,】【才】【能】【迈】【上】【成】【功】【的】【坦】【途】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【爱】【水】【竹】【,】【不】【仅】【因】【为】【她】【那】【挺】【拔】【秀】【美】【的】【外】【表】【,】【高】【雅】【脱】【俗】【的】【气】【质】【,】【更】【重】【要】【的】【是】【因】【为】【她】【那】【不】【畏】【严】【寒】【、】【蔑】【视】【困】【难】【的】【生】【活】【态】【度】【,】【还】【有】【她】【那】【争】【先】【恐】【后】【、】【奋】【发】【向】【上】【的】【进】【取】【精】【神】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【 】【 】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【采】【用】【托】【物】【言】【志】【的】【手】【法】【,】【描】【写】【“】【我】【”】【书】【房】【窗】【外】【的】【几】【盆】【水】【竹】【。】【先】【总】【写】【水】【竹】【旺】【盛】【的】【长】【势】【、】【庄】【重】【的】【色】【彩】【和】【漂】【亮】【的】【姿】【态】【;】【然】【后】【以】【时】【间】【为】【序】【,】【分】【写】【春】【夏】【秋】【冬】【水】【竹】【的】【生】【长】【情】【形】【和】【秀】【美】【外】【表】【,】【从】【中】【凸】【显】【出】【水】【竹】【蓬】【勃】【的】【生】【命】【力】【和】【傲】【霜】【斗】【雪】【的】【精】【神】【品】【质】【;】【最】【后】【卒】【章】【显】【志】【,】【写】【水】【竹】【精】【神】【对】【“】【我】【”】【的】【启】【迪】【和】【鼓】【励】【,】【表】【现】【了】【当】【代】【青】【少】【年】【应】【珍】【惜】【时】【光】【、】【不】【畏】【挫】【折】【、】【奋】【发】【向】【上】【、】【勤】【奋】【进】【取】【的】【主】【题】【。】【文】【章】【选】【材】【新】【颖】【,】【感】【情】【真】【挚】【,】【结】【构】【清】【晰】【,】【意】【旨】【显】【豁】【。】【尤】【其】【是】【文】【中】【采】【用】【象】【征】【笔】【法】【,】【并】【恰】【当】【地】【运】【用】【了】【比】【喻】【、】【拟】【人】【、】【引】【用】【等】【多】【种】【辞】【格】【,】【物】【我】【相】【融】【,】【虚】【实】【相】【生】【,】【不】【仅】【增】【添】【了】【语】【言】【的】【生】【动】【性】【,】【还】【彰】【显】【了】【文】【章】【的】【意】【旨】【,】【显】【示】【了】【小】【作】【者】【不】【凡】【的】【文】【字】【功】【底】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【王】【代】【福】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【爸】【爸】【是】【一】【个】【沉】【默】【寡】【言】【、】【老】【实】【憨】【厚】【的】【人】【,】【说】【起】【馈】【赠】【,】【他】【能】【馈】【赠】【给】【我】【什】【么】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【平】【常】【在】【饭】【桌】【上】【,】【他】【总】【是】【一】【言】【不】【发】【,】【而】【我】【却】【“】【叽】【叽】【喳】【喳】【”】【地】【讲】【着】【学】【校】【里】【发】【生】【的】【事】【情】【和】【从】【同】【学】【那】【儿】【交】【流】【回】【来】【的】【明】【星】【八】【卦】【消】【息】【。】【每】【当】【这】【时】【,】【爸】【爸】【仍】【然】【不】【语】【,】【我】【有】【时】【会】【偷】【偷】【地】【朝】【他】【那】【儿】【瞥】【一】【眼】【,】【他】【永】【远】【都】【是】【重】【复】【着】【夹】【菜】【、】【扒】【饭】【的】【机】【械】【动】【作】【,】【想】【必】【他】【没】【有】【在】【认】【真】【听】【我】【讲】【话】【吧】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【渐】【渐】【地】【,】【我】【越】【来】【越】【不】【喜】【欢】【跟】【爸】【爸】【说】【这】【些】【有】【趣】【的】【见】【闻】【了】【,】【我】【觉】【得】【我】【的】【话】【既】【然】【没】【有】【人】【会】【认】【真】【倾】【听】【,】【倒】【还】【不】【如】【不】【说】【,】【省】【得】【浪】【费】【一】【份】【感】【情】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【直】【到】【一】【天】【晚】【饭】【时】【,】【我】【自】【顾】【自】【地】【埋】【头】【吃】【饭】【,】【只】【偶】【尔】【象】【征】【性】【地】【、】【不】【带】【任】【何】【感】【情】【色】【彩】【地】【发】【表】【两】【句】【看】【法】【。】【见】【我】【这】【样】【,】【爸】【爸】【放】【下】【了】【饭】【碗】【,】【他】【的】【喉】【结】【动】【了】【动】【,】【嘴】【角】【边】【的】【胡】【须】【轻】【轻】【颤】【了】【颤】【。】【我】【以】【为】【他】【是】【吃】【完】【饭】【了】【,】【也】【没】【搭】【理】【他】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【谁】【知】【,】【“】【惜】【字】【如】【金】【”】【的】【爸】【爸】【竟】【开】【口】【说】【:】【“】【你】【怎】【么】【现】【在】【越】【来】【越】【不】【爱】【说】【话】【了】【,】【爸】【爸】【已】【经】【很】【久】【没】【有】【听】【你】【讨】【论】【泰】【勒】【·】【斯】【威】【夫】【特】【了】【,】【你】【不】【是】【很】【喜】【欢】【她】【吗】【?】【”】【顿】【了】【顿】【,】【他】【又】【说】【道】【:】【“】【你】【是】【不】【是】【认】【为】【爸】【爸】【每】【次】【不】【发】【言】【就】【是】【没】【有】【在】【听】【你】【说】【话】【?】【其】【实】【,】【你】【的】【每】【字】【每】【句】【,】【爸】【爸】【都】【听】【得】【十】【分】【认】【真】【仔】【细】【,】【只】【是】【,】【爸】【爸】【嘴】【笨】【,】【也】【不】【知】【道】【和】【你】【说】【些】【什】【么】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【的】【心】【头】【一】【暖】【,】【曾】【以】【为】【他】【不】【爱】【我】【,】【不】【关】【心】【我】【;】【曾】【以】【为】【他】【只】【在】【意】【自】【己】【的】【工】【作】【,】【不】【会】【考】【虑】【我】【的】【心】【情】【、】【感】【受】【;】【曾】【以】【为】【他】【是】【一】【个】【自】【私】【、】【不】【称】【职】【的】【爸】【爸】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【现】【在】【的】【我】【才】【明】【白】【,】【不】【善】【言】【辞】【的】【爸】【爸】【把】【他】【对】【我】【所】【有】【的】【爱】【都】【浓】【缩】【于】【他】【的】【倾】【听】【之】【中】【。】【他】【或】【许】【每】【天】【都】【会】【推】【敲】【我】【说】【的】【话】【,】【努】【力】【从】【每】【句】【话】【中】【了】【解】【我】【一】【天】【的】【心】【情】【;】【他】【或】【许】【在】【听】【到】【我】【的】【开】【心】【事】【时】【,】【也】【偷】【偷】【和】【我】【一】【起】【乐】【着】【;】【他】【或】【许】【听】【到】【我】【的】【伤】【心】【事】【时】【,】【也】【与】【我】【一】【起】【伤】【心】【、】【失】【落】【,】【然】【后】【再】【想】【方】【设】【法】【地】【带】【给】【我】【快】【乐】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【一】【刻】【,】【我】【们】【就】【这】【样】【无】【声】【地】【相】【互】【注】【视】【着】【;】【那】【一】【刻】【,】【我】【懂】【得】【了】【爸】【爸】【对】【我】【的】【沉】【默】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【亲】【爱】【的】【爸】【爸】【,】【您】【这】【1】【3】【年】【的】【倾】【听】【,】【是】【您】【无】【言】【的】【爱】【,】【是】【您】【给】【予】【我】【的】【最】【大】【的】【馈】【赠】【。】is二号头目被击毙【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【橹】【声】【悠】【远】【,】【江】【南】【古】【镇】【打】【开】【尘】【封】【的】【记】【忆】【,】【你】【是】【否】【察】【觉】【到】【它】【的】【亲】【切】【,】【宛】【若】【一】【块】【深】【藏】【在】【心】【底】【的】【梦】【影】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【—】【—】【题】【 】【记】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【常】【言】【道】【,】【江】【南】【如】【画】【,】【舟】【行】【碧】【波】【,】【人】【在】【画】【中】【;】【人】【常】【言】【,】【江】【南】【如】【诗】【,】【悠】【远】【绵】【长】【,】【和】【谐】【清】【雅】【。】【我】【却】【欲】【言】【:】【江】【南】【,】【你】【是】【我】【的】【一】【本】【书】【,】【品】【读】【江】【南】【,】【至】【纯】【至】【美】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【斜】【倚】【青】【石】【,】【坐】【岸】【听】【水】【吟】【,】【听】【!】【水】【声】【时】【而】【轻】【吟】【浅】【唱】【,】【时】【而】【若】【琴】【声】【优】【雅】【,】【怎】【叫】【人】【不】【想】【起】【“】【大】【珠】【小】【珠】【落】【玉】【盘】【”】【的】【诗】【句】【?】【水】【面】【时】【而】【平】【滑】【似】【镜】【,】【盈】【盈】【如】【缎】【,】【阳】【光】【恰】【似】【金】【色】【长】【梯】【,】【垂】【落】【水】【面】【,】【沉】【淀】【出】【满】【地】【水】【光】【涟】【漪】【,】【折】【射】【出】【彩】【色】【斑】【斓】【,】【宛】【若】【一】【世】【的】【唯】【美】【。】【伸】【手】【轻】【轻】【浸】【入】【水】【中】【,】【水】【面】【荡】【起】【一】【层】【浅】【浅】【笑】【意】【,】【只】【觉】【清】【凉】【怡】【人】【,】【让】【人】【不】【禁】【莞】【尔】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【江】【南】【,】【你】【是】【我】【的】【一】【本】【书】【,】【读】【江】【南】【的】【水】【,】【品】【味】【那】【水】【平】【如】【镜】【,】【淡】【然】【宁】【馨】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【梦】【里】【的】【如】【烟】【细】【雨】【风】【露】【清】【愁】【,】【梦】【里】【的】【红】【颜】【寂】【寞】【杏】【帘】【酒】【香】【,】【梦】【里】【的】【绿】【草】【如】【茵】【桃】【花】【流】【水】【,】【都】【融】【入】【了】【这】【江】【南】【柔】【情】【的】【雨】【中】【。】【雨】【丝】【密】【如】【花】【针】【,】【宛】【若】【圣】【洁】【的】【天】【使】【降】【临】【红】【尘】【。】【撑】【一】【把】【油】【纸】【伞】【,】【穿】【一】【身】【碎】【花】【衣】【裙】【,】【独】【步】【于】【江】【南】【的】【雨】【巷】【,】【只】【见】【雨】【珠】【成】【果】【,】【随】【着】【天】【光】【飘】【落】【,】【却】【见】【人】【家】【屋】【顶】【上】【笼】【着】【一】【层】【薄】【烟】【,】【雨】【密】【密】【地】【连】【缀】【,】【又】【在】【伞】【面】【悄】【然】【聚】【拢】【,】【终】【是】【不】【舍】【地】【滑】【落】【,】【溅】【起】【一】【地】【微】【凉】【,】【细】【看】【原】【本】【清】【晰】【的】【远】【岱】【,】【近】【处】【的】【石】【桥】【,】【只】【剩】【烟】【雨】【朦】【胧】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【江】【南】【,】【你】【是】【我】【的】【一】【本】【书】【,】【读】【江】【南】【的】【雨】【,】【感】【受】【那】【细】【腻】【柔】【情】【,】【凄】【然】【如】【诉】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【十】【四】【桥】【的】【清】【风】【明】【月】【,】【醉】【在】【这】【独】【占】【天】【下】【三】【分】【月】【色】【的】【江】【南】【。】【满】【月】【光】【华】【,】【完】【满】【无】【缺】【,】【盈】【盈】【似】【幻】【。】【月】【下】【,】【谁】【举】【杯】【邀】【明】【月】【共】【饮】【,】【对】【饮】【成】【三】【人】【。】【只】【见】【月】【华】【如】【水】【,】【可】【曾】【遥】【寄】【乡】【思】【泪】【。】【月】【却】【无】【语】【,】【只】【依】【旧】【将】【寂】【寞】【的】【光】【辉】【清】【雅】【地】【洒】【向】【大】【地】【,】【澄】【澈】【而】【迷】【人】【的】【光】【亮】【,】【任】【由】【古】【老】【的】【船】【橹】【将】【其】【轻】【轻】【搅】【动】【。】【又】【是】【谁】【,】【对】【月】【话】【思】【量】【,】【翩】【然】【起】【舞】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【江】【南】【,】【好】【一】【片】【迷】【人】【的】【故】【地】【,】【好】【一】【本】【至】【纯】【至】【美】【的】【书】【。】【江】【南】【,】【你】【是】【我】【的】【一】【本】【书】【,】【青】【鸟】【在】【烟】【雨】【中】【不】【知】【飞】【过】【多】【少】【季】【节】【,】【读】【你】【,】【让】【我】【爱】【上】【那】【份】【和】【谐】【与】【宁】【静】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【、】【宛】【如】【诗】【篇】【,】【形】【式】【诱】【人】【。】【江】【南】【如】【诗】【如】【画】【。】【温】【婉】【的】【江】【南】【在】【作】【者】【的】【心】【目】【中】【就】【是】【一】【本】【旖】【旎】【的】【书】【,】【一】【本】【让】【自】【己】【可】【以】【阅】【读】【一】【辈】【子】【也】【不】【厌】【倦】【的】【书】【。】【展】【开】【时】【,】【文】【章】【重】【章】【迭】【唱】【,】【不】【断】【用】【中】【心】【句】【“】【江】【南】【,】【你】【是】【我】【的】【一】【本】【书】【”】【来】【穿】【插】【点】【染】【,】【解】【读】【江】【南】【风】【情】【,】【使】【文】【章】【处】【处】【点】【题】【,】【遥】【相】【呼】【应】【。】【全】【文】【宛】【如】【一】【首】【美】【丽】【的】【诗】【歌】【,】【美】【不】【胜】【收】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【、】【辞】【采】【灵】【动】【,】【语】【言】【动】【人】【。】【因】【为】【钟】【爱】【这】【片】【热】【土】【,】【所】【以】【作】【者】【毫】【不】【吝】【惜】【地】【选】【用】【溢】【美】【之】【词】【来】【盛】【赞】【江】【南】【。】【作】【者】【的】【文】【辞】【积】【累】【十】【分】【丰】【厚】【,】【所】【以】【情】【到】【之】【处】【总】【能】【选】【择】【最】【恰】【当】【的】【词】【句】【来】【表】【达】【,】【信】【手】【拈】【来】【,】【灵】【动】【非】【凡】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【、】【情】【景】【优】【美】【,】【情】【感】【迷】【人】【。】【更】【值】【得】【一】【说】【的】【是】【,】【文】【章】【并】【非】【简】【单】【地】【运】【用】【诗】【词】【展】【示】【自】【己】【的】【才】【情】【,】【而】【是】【将】【这】【种】【才】【华】【巧】【妙】【地】【寓】【于】【独】【特】【而】【优】【美】【的】【景】【物】【之】【中】【。】【虚】【实】【相】【映】【,】【诗】【意】【流】【淌】【,】【美】【得】【让】【人】【惊】【叹】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【萧】【 】【珞】【)】

is二号头目被击毙:女子恋爱受挫站20层楼顶轻生

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【幸】【福】【是】【什】【么】【?】【幸】【福】【是】【一】【种】【感】【觉】【,】【一】【种】【微】【妙】【的】【感】【觉】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【最】【近】【,】【老】【妈】【总】【在】【看】【一】【个】【小】【本】【,】【也】【不】【知】【道】【里】【面】【写】【的】【什】【么】【,】【她】【也】【不】【肯】【给】【我】【看】【。】【这】【天】【,】【我】【扫】【地】【时】【,】【看】【到】【那】【个】【被】【老】【妈】【当】【机】【密】【看】【的】【小】【本】【子】【居】【然】【就】【放】【在】【桌】【子】【上】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【好】【奇】【心】【催】【我】【打】【开】【了】【它】【。】【妈】【妈】【熟】【悉】【的】【字】【迹】【映】【入】【我】【的】【眼】【帘】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【一】【页】【:】【孩】【子】【终】【于】【生】【下】【来】【了】【,】【真】【可】【爱】【。】【医】【生】【说】【他】【太】【小】【了】【,】【比】【正】【常】【孩】【子】【要】【轻】【一】【斤】【多】【。】【可】【看】【着】【他】【睡】【得】【那】【么】【熟】【,】【又】【那】【么】【健】【康】【,】【我】【觉】【得】【自】【己】【很】【幸】【福】【。】【日】【期】【是】【1】【9】【9】【8】【年】【6】【月】【2】【0】【日】【,】【是】【我】【出】【生】【的】【那】【一】【天】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【二】【页】【:】【孩】【子】【已】【经】【百】【天】【了】【,】【他】【笑】【得】【多】【好】【看】【!】【希】【望】【这】【个】【孩】【子】【能】【平】【安】【长】【大】【。】【中】【间】【还】【夹】【着】【一】【张】【我】【小】【时】【候】【的】【照】【片】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【六】【页】【:】【他】【两】【岁】【了】【,】【明】【年】【就】【要】【去】【幼】【儿】【园】【了】【,】【看】【他】【一】【点】【一】【点】【长】【大】【真】【好】【!】【他】【已】【经】【可】【以】【和】【我】【有】【少】【量】【交】【流】【了】【。】【唉】【,】【真】【有】【点】【舍】【不】【得】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【十】【页】【:】【他】【六】【岁】【了】【,】【已】【经】【上】【一】【年】【级】【了】【,】【每】【天】【接】【送】【他】【上】【学】【的】【感】【觉】【真】【好】【!】【他】【和】【同】【学】【相】【处】【得】【很】【好】【,】【每】【天】【和】【同】【学】【一】【起】【玩】【耍】【,】【一】【起】【读】【书】【,】【俨】【然】【像】【个】【小】【大】【人】【了】【,】【真】【好】【。】【我】【感】【到】【鼻】【子】【一】【阵】【酸】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【十】【五】【页】【:】【他】【八】【岁】【了】【,】【已】【经】【小】【学】【三】【年】【级】【了】【,】【要】【搬】【家】【了】【,】【他】【很】【舍】【不】【得】【他】【的】【同】【学】【和】【姥】【姥】【、】【姥】【爷】【,】【但】【为】【了】【他】【的】【前】【途】【我】【们】【必】【须】【这】【么】【做】【。】【走】【之】【前】【他】【把】【自】【己】【最】【喜】【爱】【的】【机】【器】【人】【送】【给】【了】【好】【朋】【友】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【…】【…】【页】【:】【十】【岁】【了】【,】【他】【马】【上】【要】【步】【入】【初】【中】【了】【,】【他】【很】【兴】【奋】【,】【我】【也】【应】【该】【为】【他】【做】【升】【学】【的】【准】【备】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【…】【…】【页】【:】【他】【十】【一】【岁】【了】【,】【终】【于】【有】【了】【成】【绩】【,】【他】【的】【作】【文】【发】【表】【了】【,】【虽】【然】【只】【是】【得】【了】【2】【0】【元】【钱】【的】【稿】【费】【,】【但】【是】【,】【这】【是】【他】【自】【己】【挣】【的】【钱】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【…】【…】【页】【:】【他】【的】【成】【绩】【下】【滑】【了】【,】【不】【能】【让】【他】【太】【贪】【玩】【儿】【了】【,】【要】【不】【会】【耽】【误】【他】【的】【前】【途】【,】【他】【是】【全】【家】【的】【希】【望】【啊】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【泪】【水】【打】【湿】【了】【纸】【,】【瞬】【间】【,】【幸】【福】【溢】【满】【了】【我】【全】【身】【,】【原】【来】【,】【幸】【福】【是】【一】【种】【感】【觉】【,】【很】【微】【妙】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】is二号头目被击毙【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【春】【蚕】【死】【去】【了】【,】【但】【是】【却】【留】【下】【了】【美】【丽】【的】【丝】【绸】【;】【画】【眉】【飞】【走】【了】【,】【但】【是】【却】【留】【下】【了】【美】【妙】【的】【歌】【声】【;】【雨】【滴】【落】【下】【了】【,】【但】【是】【却】【留】【下】【了】【七】【色】【的】【彩】【虹】【;】【面】【包】【不】【见】【了】【,】【但】【是】【却】【留】【下】【了】【阵】【阵】【芳】【香】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【哲】【学】【家】【说】【:】【“】【假】【如】【你】【有】【两】【块】【面】【包】【,】【你】【得】【用】【一】【块】【换】【一】【朵】【水】【仙】【花】【!】【”】【的】【确】【,】【在】【忙】【碌】【的】【都】【市】【生】【活】【中】【,】【人】【们】【脚】【步】【匆】【匆】【,】【似】【乎】【一】【切】【的】【奔】【走】【只】【是】【为】【了】【求】【取】【那】【囊】【中】【的】【面】【包】【,】【甚】【至】【连】【欢】【愉】【的】【时】【间】【都】【没】【有】【了】【。】【城】【市】【的】【快】【节】【奏】【代】【替】【了】【田】【园】【悠】【然】【,】【忙】【碌】【霸】【占】【了】【闲】【情】【,】【人】【们】【都】【在】【拼】【命】【地】【奔】【走】【而】【不】【懂】【得】【歇】【一】【歇】【忙】【碌】【的】【脚】【步】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【忙】【忙】【碌】【碌】【,】【多】【少】【人】【行】【色】【匆】【匆】【?】【他】【们】【背】【负】【着】【太】【多】【的】【面】【包】【上】【路】【,】【难】【道】【他】【们】【不】【怕】【被】【重】【荷】【所】【压】【倒】【吗】【?】【我】【们】【的】【世】【界】【由】【于】【被】【太】【多】【的】【面】【包】【所】【牵】【绊】【,】【于】【是】【失】【去】【了】【很】【多】【本】【属】【于】【我】【们】【的】【快】【乐】【。】【很】【多】【时】【候】【,】【我】【们】【所】【得】【到】【的】【只】【是】【面】【包】【的】【形】【状】【而】【已】【,】【早】【已】【失】【去】【了】【面】【包】【本】【应】【有】【的】【芬】【芳】【味】【道】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【或】【许】【人】【们】【只】【有】【站】【在】【历】【史】【的】【海】【岸】【追】【溯】【那】【一】【道】【道】【古】【老】【的】【沟】【渠】【,】【才】【能】【体】【会】【到】【那】【曾】【经】【圣】【洁】【的】【精】【神】【家】【园】【。】【可】【是】【人】【们】【早】【已】【经】【忘】【记】【了】【采】【菊】【东】【篱】【下】【的】【悠】【然】【,】【也】【忘】【记】【了】【行】【吟】【泽】【畔】【的】【淡】【然】【,】【更】【忘】【记】【了】【赤】【壁】【江】【边】【的】【壮】【心】【。】【中】【世】【纪】【的】【欧】【洲】【是】【灰】【色】【的】【,】【人】【们】【企】【图】【在】【对】【宗】【教】【的】【信】【服】【和】【无】【尽】【的】【祈】【祷】【中】【推】【动】【时】【代】【的】【巨】【轮】【。】【然】【而】【,】【他】【们】【并】【没】【有】【看】【到】【文】【明】【的】【曙】【光】【,】【直】【到】【布】【鲁】【诺】【在】【长】【满】【鲜】【花】【的】【广】【场】【上】【浴】【火】【焚】【身】【,】【一】【道】【炫】【目】【的】【精】【神】【圣】【洁】【之】【光】【才】【将】【其】【照】【亮】【,】【于】【是】【精】【神】【追】【求】【的】【价】【值】【才】【被】【人】【们】【重】【视】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【流】【连】【于】【历】【史】【的】【街】【头】【,】【我】【们】【驻】【足】【停】【留】【,】【于】【是】【听】【到】【了】【鲁】【迅】【在】【疾】【呼】【,】【看】【到】【了】【任】【长】【霞】【在】【奔】【走】【,】【领】【悟】【了】【邰】【丽】【华】【在】【奉】【献】【。】【这】【些】【人】【的】【芬】【芳】【在】【我】【们】【的】【精】【神】【世】【界】【中】【徘】【徊】【,】【它】【们】【一】【次】【一】【次】【地】【敲】【打】【着】【我】【们】【迷】【茫】【的】【心】【扉】【。】【一】【盏】【灯】【、】【一】【杯】【茶】【、】【几】【页】【书】【,】【在】【夜】【深】【之】【时】【开】【始】【探】【索】【心】【灵】【的】【净】【土】【,】【让】【自】【己】【的】【灵】【魂】【得】【以】【提】【升】【,】【在】【喧】【嚣】【的】【社】【会】【漩】【涡】【中】【营】【造】【出】【一】【弯】【平】【静】【的】【深】【潭】【,】【不】【再】【被】【外】【物】【所】【纷】【扰】【,】【此】【时】【此】【刻】【,】【我】【们】【就】【得】【到】【了】【超】【然】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【面】【对】【摆】【在】【眼】【前】【的】【众】【多】【面】【包】【,】【我】【们】【在】【填】【饱】【肚】【子】【的】【同】【时】【,】【也】【应】【当】【让】【面】【包】【走】【进】【我】【们】【的】【心】【灵】【世】【界】【。】【给】【面】【包】【的】【世】【界】【加】【点】【芬】【芳】【既】【是】【一】【种】【追】【求】【又】【是】【一】【种】【悠】【然】【,】【既】【是】【一】【种】【恬】【淡】【与】【闲】【适】【,】【又】【是】【一】【种】【潇】【洒】【与】【壮】【怀】【。】【如】【此】【,】【你】【还】【犹】【豫】【什】【么】【呢】【?】【打】【开】【书】【籍】【,】【找】【一】【个】【洒】【满】【浓】【荫】【的】【树】【下】【小】【憩】【,】【于】【是】【,】【我】【们】【开】【始】【微】【笑】【着】【去】【唱】【生】【活】【的】【歌】【谣】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【 】【 】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【标】【题】【富】【有】【新】【意】【,】【能】【够】【吸】【引】【读】【者】【的】【目】【光】【,】【同】【时】【也】【揭】【示】【了】【文】【章】【的】【主】【题】【。】【作】【者】【构】【思】【巧】【妙】【,】【开】【篇】【使】【用】【排】【比】【的】【修】【辞】【为】【文】【章】【创】【造】【了】【一】【个】【好】【的】【抒】【情】【情】【境】【。】【语】【言】【生】【动】【,】【能】【够】【使】【用】【比】【喻】【等】【修】【辞】【手】【法】【,】【长】【短】【句】【交】【替】【使】【用】【,】【丰】【富】【了】【文】【章】【的】【内】【容】【。】【能】【够】【简】【明】【地】【举】【出】【典】【型】【的】【事】【例】【,】【从】【而】【深】【化】【了】【主】【题】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【刘】【卫】【杰】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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